Odessa - Blood Mettle - Intermission

Odessa - Blood Mettle - Intermission

The hum of the engines would be the only sound Odessa could hear as the ship soared through space, there was naught else but silence. The Echani warrior had locked herself away in a room of the Blood Mettle, where she had been instructed to change while her mind was heavily toiled with. As disgruntled as she may have been having to wear a dress once more, it was better than the alternative of only smallclothes. After getting changed, Odessa, knowing there was not much she could do, would try to find some semblance of sleep, however brief.

She is awoken by a light thump as the ship landed, and the sound of movement coming closer towards the door. A guard would attempt to open it, and after failing to do so, she would hear Nero chuckle, before the door was ripped open.

The Echani Noble then enters, that same confident smirk written upon his face, as he appraised Odessa and her choice of dress. It was royal purple, and was finely detailed with glitter and patterns of constellations, its edges trimmed with gold.

“I knew you would choose that dress. it’s rather fitting, truly.” His words flow confidently, the sheer arrogance in his words earning an infuriated expression from Odessa. Her mouth opens to speak but finds that no words ever leave it. Her features would contort in confusion, before Nero breaks her train of thought by speaking once more.

“Come, your mother is waiting, and she is quite eager to see you.” He stands there, waiting for her to depart the ship, a hand extended towards where the door once was. Odessa was resting against the wall, her spirit battered and bruised. She was tired, exhausted even, and did not have the energy to protest or escape, despite almost every thought in her mind telling her to run. Perhaps it was the hopelessness of the situation that was settling in, or perhaps something more sinister was at play…


Opulence would meet her gaze, her vision filled with white marble as far as the eye could see, when she stepped out of the ship. She would also notice the three story tall mansion she spent half of her childhood life within. Lush and lavish gardens rose up on either side of the path forward, exotic plants native to Eshan amongst them. Odessa scowled once she realized the reality of the situation she was now in, heavy steps carrying her forward.

And there she was, the woman she so despises, the woman who she thought she would never rest eyes upon once more, Gwe’nevre. She rushed right towards her, bringing Odessa into her embrace. Odessa felt nothing, for she was numb to her mothers affections.

“Odessa! my ray of sunshine! Oh how I have missed you! So glad am I that you have been returned to us!” Cupping her child’s face in her arms, she would closely examine her eyes. Her joyful gaze would be met by the tired and furious stare of Odessa.

“Ah! you must be exhausted from your trip! come, come! we shall have a feast! and we may talk as well!” Without prompt or hesitation, Gwe’nevre grabs one of her arms and practically pulls her along to the gargantuan mansion. Nero and his guards shortly follow.

tak tak tak tak
The sounds of footsteps echo loudly through the grand hall, as Gwe’nevre and those that followed walk upon the stainless polished floor. The Interior of the mansion was just as overly decorated as what could be seen outside, grossly so. Doors upon doors could be seen in any direction one looked, and high above, a large crystal chandelier that would have been double the size of the small ship outside hung overhead. Large golden statues littered the hall, one for each member of house Corin’thalla. One would stand out in particular, a recent addition. The plaque underneath reads: Odessa Corin’thalla. She would squint towards it as they passed.

Gwe’nevre opens a door to a dining room, or, what Odessa would consider a dining hall. It was large enough to feed hundreds of people, yet there was only one long table in the middle, with enough chairs for twenty people. Right at the end of this table was a chair that was more akin to a throne, and it would be where her mother would sit. She would direct Odessa to take a seat to her left, while Nero sat opposite to her. The guards would be not be seen anywhere, however what Odessa would notice was servants who came to and from the table, leaving excessive amounts of food upon it. The sight made her blood boil, not only due to her hatred of the Echani caste system, but because she could see Antrisse in each of them, and knowing she could not be in her company, it soured her already rapidly depleting state of mind. In contrast to Odessa, Gwe’nevre was in high spirits, and Nero had that usual noble smugness about him.

“Now, you must be wondering why we have gone through such efforts to find you, my dear. I am sure you have come to the conclusion as to why.” Odessa just stares at her mother, who in turn, observed her child sinking in the chair she sat upon.

“Your testimony! your description of the events that occurred, how you rescued a Jedi Initiate from death! it was your moment, your sign that you are like us! never were you a black sheep, and never should we have cast you away, for the force flows through you, just as it does us!” She grins so wide it makes Odessa shiver in her seat, as her anger is overshadowed by fear.

“You only see what you wish to see…” she responds, her tone flat, but the fear was there, and building.
“No, my child, what I see is my child who is soon to bloom…and we have such grand plans for you, our family. You see…” Her mothers voice would fade from her ears, as she stared at her, eyes widened as if she had heard something she was never supposed to. Seconds turn to minutes, minutes turn into an hour as she sits there while her mother talks at her.

“…And you are to marry Nero.”

She blinks, waking from her daze.

“…What?”

“Nero is to become Corin’thalla, and you are to be his wife. It is expected in time that you will sire children with him, as is the duty of each Corin’thalla.”

Odessa was stunned. Her mouth hang open in shock for a time.

“No.”

“No? there is no refusal to this, Odessa, you are to wed him. The date has already been set.”
She stares at her mother, and then to Nero.

“No.” she says plainly. “I refuse, I am not going along with this, for my heart belongs to another.”

“That -servant- owns nothing of yours, she has tricked you with her wiles, and you have foolishly been been hooked. Your place is at my side, where we shall grow and foster our own family, and you can live in peace. In a home where all you will ever need do is tend to our children, and live boisterously in luxury with family, friends, and nobility. Never will you need to lift another blade, to spill blood. You would be safe with me!”

The rage wins over her fear, and Odessa stands, knocking the chair back in the process.

“I will -not- be a trophy wife! not now, nor ever!!!”

Gwe’nevre exhales deeply, and raises a hand to Odessa.

“My love is with Antrisse! I will not fors–” She pauses, as what feels like a thick fog enters her mind. She holds her head in her hands then, as it starts to ache.

Antrisse… she is the one I have bonded with most, the one who I have fought alongside for many cycles, many days and nights have we toiled and marched as one. I am the beskar to her beskad, and we dance as one. always. When first we met… Her brow scrunches in frustration.
When first we met…Wait…how did we meet?..
A shake of her head.
She is the one who I would dance between the stars with, throughout the cosmos and the great beyond.
She thinks to herself.
Beskar, and beskad.
She repeats this in her mind intentionally, over and over again.

“You are tired my dear, you should rest. We shall talk more tomorrow, for it shall be a big day. The whole family will be here to see you, and we shall test the strength of your connection to force.”

Odessa stares at Gwen’vere in disbelief. A stare that lasts far longer than it should.

“Servants, if you would~” She claps, and Odessa is escorted out of the hall, and upwards to the third floor, where eventually she is left by the door to her room. Sighing, she opens the door to find someone oddly familiar to her. It takes a moment, but she finally comes to the conclusion that it was the nanny who once raised her, who oversaw much of her childhood in these walls.

“Ah, Odessa! you look so…so…unladylike!” Odessa furrows a brow at the words that slip out of her mouth.
“This dress, it suits you wonderfully, and yet…these muscles do you no favors. No no no! this will not do!” She frets, thinking aloud to herself. “Not to worry! we shall have you back to slim and slender in no time!” She says, cheering, which causes the warrior to sweat.

“I am a smith, I forge…” Odessa retorts tiredly, frustration toned in her words.

“No no no! that is not a duty of a lady, and you will no longer be doing that, oh no! We shall make a housewife of you yet!” Her chirpy voice was getting under her skin, as were her words. The nanny shuffles around, and closes the door behind them.

“Now let’s begin!”

“…Begin what exactly?”

Shortly after, screams of agony would echo throughout the mansion…

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Fog. Darkness. Figures clad in armor. A woman in the distance? Antrisse. It is Antrisse…She is smiling…her smile is something I could never forget.

Her eyes open slowly, tiredly with exhaustion, as she wakes from her slumber. She stares at the white canopy above that drapes over the four poster bed. Her mind was clouded and hazy, and she had a strong feeling that she had lost something.

Who were those people? they must have been important…Antrisse…I miss you…I wish—

Pulsing, burning pain courses through her head. By instinct, her hands raise to her temples, except…they don’t. Her eyes pan to an arm, expecting for it to lift, but it doesn’t. It was almost as if something was overpowering her, holding her down. Fear and panic began to creep in, the pain is unbearable, and just as it seems she was going to pass out from it…it stops, as does the weight bearing down on her.

It was then that the doors to the room burst open, and her mother made her entrance known.
her heels clack against the marbled floor as she makes her way to the glass door opposite to herself, which she would then open to reach the balcony.

Odessa lifts herself up and rests her weight on one hand while she inspects her surroundings, a large frown forming on her lips after the fact. The room was large, extravagant, and more sizable than a small apartment or house. Ornaments, vases, and paintings of family littered the room, as well as a absurdly oversized mirror. In one corner stood an gargantuan wardrobe that would have to be three times the size of her. "Needless. She thought to herself. “Absolutely needless.”

What she would see directly in front of her was a large tapestry hung about the wall that depicted her life…or at least, the idealized version of it. Her life as a child, brimming with potential, and surrounded by family, her adolescent years, where she would learn to dance and play music, and her adult life, as a woman who would have a marriage arranged to a noble and sire many children, until eventually, she would grow old and her children would bring more into the world. Her eyes bare disgust and non-conformity to such a life, a life she would never wish to live. That she had so much space dedicated to her burns the coals of her fire. It was as if she was a child again…This was once her room, after all.

Upon closer inspection, Gwe’nevre was dressed as if she was getting ready for a formal dinner, what, with her sparkling silver dress, and gem-encrusted heels. That’s when she remembered what was happening today.

Gazing out to Eshan, the mother would begin to speak.

“House Corin’thalla has stood for many a generation. Our ancestors were not as well off as we are now, yet they toiled away to create a better life for those who came after them…for us. My great grandmother fostered many connections, and brought families together to elevate that which we were, that which we would become, as did my grandmother, and my mother after her. As I have further brought status and recognition to this house, soon so too shall you, my dearest child…worry not, for the rest of your days shall be lived in peace and luxury…”

Odessa makes her way out of bed, but stumbles and falls the moment she tries to place weight on her legs. It was in that moment that she realized that something was very wrong, yet she couldn’t determine why after recollection. Slowly, limping over to the mirror would reveal exactly what was going on, and she would freeze from what the mirror reflected back to her.

She was a pale shadow of her former self, she looked frail, weak, the toned body she had earned working within the forge was now gone, as was most of her body mass. By all standards she would be considered conventionally attractive in this slender, more gentle form, but it wasn’t -her-, she thought to herself. Her heart was in her mouth as she kept staring into the mirror, before she finally managed to utter the question on her lips.

“What…What happened to me?”

Gwe’nevre turns to face her, a serene smile on her face. “What do you mean darling? you look just like the beautiful daughter I remember, the daughter I knew you would bloom to be.”

Her mind darts from one thought to another.

What is going on here? Why do I look like this? What is she hiding from me?
Or perhaps…perhaps it is just me, perhaps I am just tired or I did not have adequate sleep…yeah…that must be it.

That serene smile upon her mother’s face only grows as she closes the glass door behind her, and makes her way over to Odessa for a tender embrace.

What are you doing? Let me go! I don’t want any of this, or anything from you!
…But perhaps I am being too hard on her. She is my mother, and she does care for me…

“I shall await you in the dining hall, my golden child~ try not to tarry, our family should be here any moment now!” She hums merrily as she departs, leaving Odessa to her thoughts…


Tap tap tap tap tap

Some time later, a rapid clacking of heels could be heard, as a woman around her age bursts through the door and pulls her into a tight hug, before spinning her around enthusiastically.

“Odessa! Odessa! I am so glad to see you!” She nearly squeals that out.

“When mother sent you away I screamed and begged her for weeks to being you back, and when she refused…I just…I thought you were gone…but then we saw the trial! I was overjoyed to know you were still alive…and I was content with knowing you were living your best life, away from all, well…this.”

She breaks from the hug, cupping the face of her sister before her expression shifts from joy to worry and concern.

“Odessa…are you well? do you feel sick?”

“I…I am fine, Aisti…and I am glad to see you too…”

Aisti tuts at her, unconvinced. “Dessy…you do not look okay, are you sure?”

“Indeed.”

“Well, the moment you do feel unwell I am bringing you right back here, okay?”

Odessa slowly nods her head.

“Great! let us go meet the family! they are quietly excited to see you!”

“Except for Hild’ii.” Odessa quickly retorts.

“…Except for Hild’ii.”

The two make their way to the dining hall, catching one another up with the tales of their lives along the way.


All eyes were on Odessa.
Every single member of the family.
It was a daunting thing, and there was a level of pressure one could never begin to describe.

“Now, my dear. bring the glass to you.” the words of her mother ring through her ears, as sweat rolls down her face.

“…I can not do what you ask of me.”

“Nonsense, my child, you are perfectly capable of this. now please. try.”

She hesitates, truly nervous with everyone watching her.

“Move. the glass.” Her father then drones, before he is berated by Gwe’nevre.

The Warrior was afraid, but still, she extends her arm, and concentrates on the glass.

“Oh come on! you are not even trying!” Her father is swatted once more.

“Give her time, my love.” Gwe’nevre gives a reassuring look after his outburst.

Odessa concentrates, as much as is she able, but…
Nothing happens.
The nerves kick in.
everyone is staring at her but she can’t give them what they want.
She panics.
Tears begin to flow.

“I knew it, she is just as pathetic as ever…” growls Hild’ii.

“Hild’ii! that is no way to speak to your sister!”

“I speak only the truth, mother. This is a waste of time…”

“I will not allo–” the voices fade.
All the remains for Odessa was what she could see on their faces.
Anger.
Disgust.
Annoyance.
but most of all.
Dissapointment.
all, except for one.
Aisti was worried, and scared, and out of all the faces she could see, hers was the one that Odessa could not pull her gaze from.

Suddenly, she feels her arm being pulled up out of the chair, and lead away from the table.
Her heart sinks when she realizes it’s not Aisti taking her away.
It’s the Nanny.


Odessa is led down a dimly lit corridor and set of stairs. The further they travel, the darker it seems to become, until the only think illuminating the path ahead is the holotorches.

“Too many people got you all in a twist, and that will not do, no no no!” she frets.

“We shall try something a little more different!” The Nanny opens a door and gestures for Odessa to enter.

Behind the door is an almost empty room, besides a pedestal near the doorway, and an identical glass to the one she was asked to move in the dining hall.

“Now dearie, please stand in the middle now~” she chirps.

Hesitantly, Odessa makes her way to the middle of the room. As she does, the floor lights up in a circle, as the path behind her suddenly disappears. It was as if it was never there in the first place.
She turns to see that it was now gone, and glances up to the Nanny, before turning her head to the glass. Everything starts to make sense then, and fear creeps in her mind.

“Now, you are going to move the glass off this pedestal! It does not matter how you do it, as long as it is moved, mhm! Once you do, the mechanism will stop!” Her voice was bubbly and cheery, and she seemed excited for what would happen next.

“What mechanism?”
As Odessa says this, there’s a clicking sound and the sound of wind gushing inwards shortly after.
click
click
click
She finally realizes what is happening, as the tiles in the room disappear one by one, revealing a long way down to the ground. In other words, certain death. The outer tiles disappear first, but the pattern slowly makes its way to the middle. Her fear kicks up a notch as the prospect of falling seems inevitable. Reaching for the glass in desperation, Odessa tries once more to concentrate on it, but she does not know what it is she has to do, not truly.
click
click
click
Four tiles remain, then three, then two–
Odessa screams at the top of her lungs.
The glass breaks into pieces.
It falls off the pedestal.
The tiles return.

There’s a long silence.
The Nanny stares at Odessa.
The warrior has no idea what to think.
She stares at the glass fragments.
She was shaken.
Stunned.

The Nanny finally breaks the silence.

“Hooray! you did it Odessa! I knew you could! Your mother will be so proud! and so will Nero!”
If she was cheery before, it pales in comparison to how she is now. The Nanny was clapping and cheering and carrying on, while the warrior just stared at the Pedestal.

“Come! come! let us tell them all the good news!” She grabs Odessa’s arm once more.

Was that the force?..or just my voice…

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The days that follow are a blur for Odessa. There are family talks she does not care to remember, some with everyone, and some that were one-on-one. As time went on, she could tell that something was wrong, she had a feeling there was, but she could never put her finger on it.

Who is the woman who haunts my dreams with her smile? why do I feel so…drawn to her?
She pokes her plate of food with a fork, considering.
Beskar and Beskad? what do they mean? And why do they put me at ease?
Beskar and Beskad.
Beskar and Beskad.
Beskar and Beskad.

Repeating this over and over in her mind calms her down, her stress and frustration seemingly vanishing.

“You were dreaming about that woman again, were you not?” Gwe’nevre asks plainly.

“…I was…I do not know why.”

“She is nothing but trouble, and should you ever run into her again, you -must- stay away from her.”

Why do I need to stay away from her? what is so troublesome about a chance encounter?
I should listen to mother though, she is looking out for me, and knows what is best.

“…Yes mother.” she sighs.

“Rejoice, my bride to be! Soon we shall be married, and the house will be better for it. I fondly await the ceremony with bated breath.” Nero remarks, his tone dripping with that usual smug stench.

Odessa was not interested in the man whatsoever.

Sensing this, her mother would speak up.

“I understand how you feel my dear, but in time you shall understand and grow to appreciate the noble life, with Nero at your side…it will take time, of course, but you will adjust to it.” She was calm in her tone, and hopeful for the future."

“I…I will try…for my family.” is her reply.

“That is all I can ask of you, dearest Odessa.”

Odessa takes her time to finish her meal, before returning to her room.


I’ll be here when you wake Gorar’nau, I’ll be by your side

Odessa wakes with a start in the middle of the night, her heart beating fast.
The Echani warrior turns back to her pillow and tries to find sleep once more, before she realizes she is not alone in the room.

“Odessa…” It was the voice of her father, Max’umis, and it was full of contempt.

“You might have the others fooled, but not I…you are a black stain upon our great family…and you must be expunged…” He spoke with conviction, not hiding his intention.

“What are you tal–” Suddenly, Odessa is grabbed by the throat, and thrown across the room. She stares into the eyes of her father, and only sees death. He doesn’t waste any time closing the gap between them, and lifts his daughter off the ground with his arm around her neck.
slam!
slam!
slam!
Odessa is slammed into the wall, again and again. There was still fight in her, and struggle she did, but it was not enough to break free, and with each passing second, her consciousness began to fade…

Get up…
A familiar voice echo’s in her mind, and her vision flashes to the moment she almost died on Malak’s ship, the moment she used every ounce of her strength to save a Jedi’s life.

Fan that flame Ner’cyar, let it burn and when we can dance again we shall avenge our gold
Another voice calls to her, a voice she recognizes well, despite her lack of memory. It calls, and she answers.

In her next moments the floodgates open, and that rage so deeply buried roars to the surface as she screams a battle cry and frees herself from her father’s clutches, before throwing the man through the windows and door. The man stumbles backwards in shock, like a fool who has just realized he has bitten off more than he can handle…He was in so much shock that he didn’t see how close he was to the railing, until he wasn’t anymore.

thump

And that was that.

Odessa was gasping and wheezing for hair. She collapses onto the ground, before coughing up blood.
After a few moments pass, Aisti bursts into the room to check what was happening.

“Odessa!” she yells, running to her side. “What happened to you?!”

“Father…he tried to…end me…” she wheezes, then points to the balcony.

Her sister’s eyes open widely in shock, and she quickly looks over the balconies edge, covering her mouth in disbelief before returning.

“Oh no… oh no…we need to get you out of here…and fast.”

“I can not leave…you know this.”

“…Maybe not right now, but we can get a call out to your allies. They can get you out of here! who should I speak too?”

Odessa shakes her head. “Not a holocall, they could track your signal…no… you need a ship.
Take the Blood Mettle…go to Viscara…and speak with…with…” She tries to remember the names of the figures clad in armor, and just when it seems fruitless…

“Inar…Inarin…speak to him…tell him what happened here.”

“What about you? I will not just leave you here!” pain and fear trembled through her voice as she spoke.

“You must…trust me on this…please.”

Tears roll down Aisti’s face, and after a long moment, she nods to her sister. “Okay…okay!” standing up, she turns to leave.

“And Aisti?”

“Yes Dessy?”

“Do not come back. Stay on Viscara, seek out the Jedi, they will protect you.”
She slowly nods over her shoulder as she leaves the room.


Odessa wakes to find the Nanny scowling at her.

“I have been patient with you missy! mhm! but you keep causing a fuss! and we can not have that, oh no!” She places her hands on her hips, and tuts at the winded warrior.

“From now on, you will obey my every command!..And if you do not…well…”
The searing pain in her head returns, and she screams out in agony…

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